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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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Sydney, Australia

0 posted 2009-07-12 03:58 AM



A precious gift arrived today
wrapped in day’s sunshine
tied with a bright red bow
I opened it up
and to my surprise
a hand written note
was penned in many hues
it spoke of friendship
and a yearning to be free
of happiness and love
and how quickly things go
But the last line simply said
You are the light that brings me smiles
And with that I smiled too...

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

© Copyright 2009 Roniece Dawson-Bruce - All Rights Reserved
Rick
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia
1 posted 2009-07-12 04:31 AM


Sounds like you had a lovely gift today Roniece, lucky you, lovely words you share here my friend, have great what is left of the weekend.

Rick

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
2 posted 2009-07-12 06:05 AM


Now, this is good news, dear Roniece. Your smile brings joy to all of us and the gift you have received is ever so sweet and deserved!

Thank you for sharing your beautiful surprise with us in such a lovely way.

Love and smiles.
Margherita

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
3 posted 2009-07-12 10:24 AM


let's call it love, ah Roniece this is great, thanks for the very lovely words.

yann

secondhanddreampoet
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4 posted 2009-07-12 08:34 PM


v. well written!

applause!!

Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
5 posted 2009-07-12 09:04 PM


You always need a good smile every single day..... beautiful RDB


ARCTIC WIND

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
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6 posted 2009-07-12 09:08 PM


Yo dear RDB,

This little poem works well.  It's very good.

Love Bobby

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria
7 posted 2009-07-12 10:31 PM



You are the light that brings me smiles
And with that I smiled too...

And you are the one that brings us smiles

as well dear Roniece. a lovely post my dear.
love

Lindsay

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
8 posted 2009-07-12 10:44 PM


A precioous gift for a precious person!
Light attracts Light!

May all your days be as happy, Radiant One!

Smiling here!
Linda

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
9 posted 2009-07-13 08:01 AM


thank you so very much everyone, I really appreciate your warm and lovely comments on my work...

Hugs and love
RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
10 posted 2009-07-14 07:28 PM


"You are the light that brings me smiles."  How beautiful...James
Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
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So. El Monte, California
11 posted 2009-07-14 09:13 PM


Lucky you, Roniece.
                 Ida

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