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secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2009-07-10 06:14 PM


           endless voids  

Above an ever-darkling stage
of passing strangers
walking this world alone,
beyond comprehension…

moon in an empty sky


© Copyright 2009 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
2islander2
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1 posted 2009-07-11 04:20 AM


yes Bruce, prettyful image, the moon of course, but the poet too...Thanks for the poem.

yann

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2 posted 2009-07-11 01:18 PM


This might be my favorite of yours, Bruce.  I love it even though it haunts me because it sounds lonely.  It's hard to walk alone, but we see so much when we do.

I am glad you are here, poetic friend.

A

Marchmadness
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3 posted 2009-07-11 02:09 PM


You do know how to capture the feel of loneliness, Poet. This may be sad but it truly fine writing.
                                  Ida

nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2009-07-12 07:54 AM


I feel the same most often~~


M

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