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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2009-07-10 03:55 PM


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The heaviness
Of the head
Now grows light

In sleep
At rest
On a soft
White pillow

And
The heaviness
Of the arm
Grows light
On another

To our ships
In its harbor
The silence
Of night
Is calling home

And
The heaviness
Of the heart
Passes away
Into quiet
Eternity

Under the gaze
Of a stolid moon


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secondhanddreampoet
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1 posted 2009-07-10 05:28 PM


"The heaviness
  Of the heart
  Passes away
  Into quiet
  Eternity"

particularly GREAT line!

applause for this 'penning' !



2islander2
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by the sea
2 posted 2009-07-11 10:43 AM


great;

yann

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