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jbstillwater
Member

since 2009-07-03

Posts 216
Albuquerque, New Mexico

0 posted 2009-07-09 04:28 PM

Hiking her skirt above her knees, she sits,
a pearl of wisdom, legs dimpled.
She likes what she sees. He wonders.
Did she do this just for him?
Edging her legs, tanned, toned,
he pretends not to notice .
His manhood tested, he made the grade!

Sipping her drink, she smiles at the waiter
Nice eyes…sweet young thing.
She winks as he brings her another
double with a twist. She likes the twist!

Laughing at his jokes,
touching his hand, rubbing that finger,
a wedding band gone for a while.
White where the sun never reaches,
an indentation forever there .
Hers, replaced by a cultured pearl
when her own band went missing
in the back of his truck.
He smiles at her giggles and jiggles,
as the skirt slips higher.

Did he notice? Did he enjoy?

She is in love with love; he is in love with her;
yet they both know, all that glitters…

Janet K. Brennan

Heart2Heart
Senior Member

since 2009-05-15

Posts 738
Scotland/Norway

1 posted 2009-07-09 04:37 PM

Spellbinding hours of stolen passion methinks:-) Lovely to see you here Jan !
Heart2Heart

WTBAKELAR

Senior Member

since 2008-09-09

Posts 1089
Utah, USA

2 posted 2009-07-09 04:47 PM

An intelegent woman always knows how to bait the hook. Most important when fishing.
They have learned that men are among the easiest to catch of those that roam the wild kingdom. Even better if they have a truck, EH?

Clever, seductive write,
Well done,
Tracey.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2009-07-09 10:00 PM

loved this... from the title on

Nicely done!

M

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

4 posted 2009-07-09 10:24 PM

you are a wonderful poetess

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2009-07-10 05:43 AM

Absolutely captivating!

I enjoy reading you.

Love,
Margherita

Johan
Member

since 2009-05-13

Posts 88
Lincolnshire, England U.K.

6 posted 2009-07-10 06:10 AM

So very different than your usual poetry Jan, but always your brilliant style shines through, just a very readable piece that I enjoyed.

Johan

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2009-07-10 07:42 AM

truck backs are the cradle of heaven sometimes..and the best bands are the ones playing belly rub music down in the bayou..

kewl stuff ms!

jbstillwater
Member

since 2009-07-03

Posts 216
Albuquerque, New Mexico

8 posted 2009-07-10 02:18 PM

Thanks guys:

Happy that you liked this one.

Until I get to know you all, I am afraid I can not adress each of you one by one, but that will happen and I am happy that you are liking my posey

Huggs to all
Jan

OldPoet
Member

since 2009-06-30

Posts 112
The Left Coast

9 posted 2009-07-10 06:59 PM

Oh such naughty, naughty brilliance, m'dear!

"And every time I've held a rose
It seems I only felt the thorns,
And so it goes" - Billy Joel

jbstillwater
Member

since 2009-07-03

Posts 216
Albuquerque, New Mexico

10 posted 2009-07-11 02:03 PM

Thanks John:

Had fun writing this one

Jan

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