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sewasham
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0 posted 2009-07-09 10:05 AM


This Place I Go

Everyone must find a place where they can go to cope
With all the trials life will bring, somewhere that gives them hope
Solace sought where peace abounds is where my thoughts will flow
I find release and self content within this place I go

The stress free shelter that I’ve found where I can meditate
Is somewhere I can always go that’s calming and sedate
Inside a dreamers mind resides a world that few may know
It's here my soul can find itself within this place I go

Without a way to find relief the spirit soon may break
For there are always times that bring much more than one can take
When the stress of troubled times and storms of life may blow
They will never reach me here within this place I go

Never knowing what will be, I’ll enter in the fray
Facing all life’s challenges until the close of day
A peaceful warm and calm abode is waiting for me though
For I have found my Shangri-la within this place I go


© Copyright 2009 Stephen E. Washam - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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1 posted 2009-07-09 11:05 AM


SAVED!!!!

Steve, you think and do as I do! ~ You expressed my sentiments exactly! It's amazing, but we carry that "Shang-ri-la" around with us at all times. All we have to do is meditate and enter that peaceful place.

Love and Peace to you!

Linda

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2 posted 2009-07-09 11:47 AM


I am so glad that you have this beautiful place to go and shake off the stress of the day.  And, I am selfish enough to be glad that you share this with us through your poetry.  

I am a fan.

Alison

Marchmadness
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3 posted 2009-07-09 12:34 PM


I am also a fan, Stephen, and like Linda I will be keeping this one.
                                    Ida

Margherita
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4 posted 2009-07-09 01:24 PM


Dear Stephen, thank you for sharing your secret for bearing stress and find peace and tranquility. You have written a very uplifting and significant piece of poetry.

I too know of this place, where recharging the batteries is possible and more than that ... we find ourselves.

Love,
Margherita

steavenr
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5 posted 2009-07-10 10:00 PM


you've described 'this place' so well...every one needs a place like this to escape to...nice write...very nice
Oklahoma Rose
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6 posted 2009-07-10 10:27 PM


It's nice to have a place to go, where one can feel calm and serene.
2islander2
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7 posted 2009-07-11 04:28 AM


precious verses, have to be remembered.

yann

Bill Charles
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8 posted 2009-07-11 11:26 PM


sewasham - finding a peaceful place is difficult, but it can be done. I see you have found yours. Also, I have found a place also...

BC

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
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9 posted 2009-07-11 11:52 PM



Hi Stephen, take a bow my friend for that is truly a great poem. A delight to read.

It is often very hard for some folk to find that special place where the find peace, I'm

so glad that you have found yours.
Take care my friend. much enjoyed.

Lindsay

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