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leather roses & lady shoes |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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in some yawning sleepy distance, a horizon reclining slowly onto purple mountain elbows with jutting breasts unhaltered by the clouds pressing their ripple shapes into tomorrow like filling sighs with willing whispering some day older ocean from yesterday morning she is still lying there on her side like a stayed over longer lover that says the dawn was worth waiting for just to see the sun when I do one time and I imagine her flavors are still salty like the edge of a smile after laughter when the proper is moved aside just a little and comfort takes over the controls allowing loss of control to have feelings when my mouth asks her heart where her mind is _______________ daark (forbidden) |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
keeper, keeper, keeper my mind-eyes were seeing the Channel Islands thanking you for the multiple views you are a primo sensual 'total landscape' artist |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
 well Mr Daark.. for the record my mind is...... lovely gifting .. RDB xBe kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh, my ...! The emotions that surge from this terrific poem make me sigh ... your poetic heights are truly spectacular. Love, Margherita |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I remember those very mountains... they still call to me. Well done, m'friend... enjoyed as I always do with that first sip of hot chocolate... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms midnite..yep...you got the snapshot babe!! thanks so much _____________ ms r&b, thanks lady friend _________________ ms mar, thank you for the touch ms ________________ ms sun, thanks babe for the peek in and the cocoa kiss |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
"and I imagine her flavors are still salty like the edge of a smile after laughter when the proper is moved aside just a little and comfort takes over the controls allowing loss of control to have feelings when my mouth asks her heart where her mind is" incredible |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms slick...thank you ocean lady!! |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
quote: I'll just keep it all, thank you very much. It tucks into my pocket perfectly - Dark friend, your mind ravels in the most wonderful, magical way. Ali-san |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san..thank you for the tuck babe!! |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
nice write...last line is classic |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I would only be repeating what the others have said~~ but I've always loved how your mind works~~  M |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Steavenr, thanks guy! _______________ Ms MMs, thanks babe for the wave |
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rachaelfuchsberger
since 2007-02-21
Posts 609Las Vegas, NV |
This calls to mind some of the ancient Greek portrayals of Gaia. Very much enjoyed. Arana Darkwolf |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms RFB...thank you...just the circle of night and day.. |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
D Nice glamour words. Wondering what you traded for this gift of sorcery... Tranced, H |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
very cool write! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ubp..traded? shhhh just stole it...thanks lady ________________ ms miscell, thank you so much |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
The charm from this magical piece still flows abundantly ... You are missed! Love, Margherita |
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MorningStar Member
since 2009-10-26
Posts 290Pittsburgh, Pa |
Okay, I totally read this, smiled slowly - then read it again, and smiled even more slowly. Thanks for that. Aenea If I don't say it...who will? |
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