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OldPoet
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The Left Coast

0 posted 2009-07-09 12:41 PM




"And every time I've held a rose
It seems I only felt the thorns,
And so it goes" - Billy Joel

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Johan
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1 posted 2009-07-09 06:34 AM


Enjoyable as always Oldpoet, look forward to reading more.

Johan

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Gaia
2 posted 2009-07-09 06:49 AM


LOL, beautifully presented bedroom drama.
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3 posted 2009-07-09 09:08 AM


A little tongue in cheek...
and a smile to remember it by.



Good job on all fronts.


nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2009-07-09 09:17 AM


I'm with Sunshine~~ made me smile~~

M

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5 posted 2009-07-09 11:56 AM


You made me smile.  This is such fun to read and the lady looks so smug in the picture (almost like she set him straight, by george!).

Thanks, Poet friend.

A

OldPoet
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6 posted 2009-07-09 12:06 PM


Great comments. I posted this in another forum some time ago and nobody got it. Thanks, PIPpers.

"And every time I've held a rose
It seems I only felt the thorns,
And so it goes" - Billy Joel

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