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OldPoet
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0 posted 2009-07-09 12:16 PM


As requested by Bill Charles...



"And every time I've held a rose
It seems I only felt the thorns,
And so it goes" - Billy Joel

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Bill Charles
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1 posted 2009-07-09 12:29 PM


OldPoet - you have done a masterful work with this writing. The guitar I can feel and hear, the woman in the photo, well, h'mmmm, what can I say...

BC

OldPoet
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2 posted 2009-07-09 12:43 PM


Her name, I believe, is Heart Stopper.

"And every time I've held a rose
It seems I only felt the thorns,
And so it goes" - Billy Joel

2islander2
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3 posted 2009-07-09 04:40 AM


Hi , the woman makes me think of Carla Bruni, who was a model, then a singer and has married to Nicolas Sarlozy, president of France, she looks like a lot...I think there are some girls who look like each others. Thanks for the poem.

yann

[This message has been edited by 2islander2 (07-10-2009 03:07 AM).]

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4 posted 2009-07-09 11:59 AM


I like the poem a lot - but, you know, I kind of got lost in cheekbone envy.  And look how long her fingers are - they are beautiful and probably just right for the guitar.

A good melding of poem and picture.

Alison

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2009-07-09 12:05 PM


Thank BC for me, for requesting this post! As a guitar-player myself ~ I adore everything about it! SAVED

Absolutely beautiful!


EA


jbstillwater
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6 posted 2009-07-09 04:24 PM


Well, you know how I feel when you write about music and the gorgeous instruments that make them happen and this poem is just wonderful.  There is a sexy edge to each line, a bending-swaying thing goin' on here,John.

Another of your best!

Huggs
Jan

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7 posted 2009-07-09 04:48 PM


Indeed this has a sensuous and passionate sway to it, something very seductive about a guitar..... Inspiring and stimulating as always dear John.
Katriona

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