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RC Langill
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since 2008-03-09
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0 posted 2009-07-08 09:19 PM


Exuberance

I love watching swallows fly,
To see them
   swoop
       and bank  
               and glide
And hear them chirp
As they work the skies.

Other birds
    Can fly
But
    Flying is
    What swallows are        

RC Langill author of Simple Feelings & Deep Passions romantic poems from a real romance

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Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2009-07-08 09:25 PM


Yo RC Langill,

I like this poem.  What you say is true.

Bobby

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
2 posted 2009-07-08 10:48 PM


RC Langill - I agree with you, I watch the swallows here, and they are amazing to watch...

BC

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
3 posted 2009-07-09 04:55 AM


I love watching the swallows and what you say is so true.
                             Ida

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
4 posted 2009-07-09 09:58 AM


Oh, yes they have such grace and skill! They are the acrobats of the air.

Wonderful, I loved this!

Love,
Margherita


Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
5 posted 2009-07-09 11:13 AM


You captured their grace and exuberance in this charming poem!

Love, Light & Swallows!

EA

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