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Yoinn
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since 2007-08-16
Posts 649
Michigan

0 posted 2009-07-08 09:15 PM



Big Ole Box

Simulate the norm
Help the process
With your toe
Follow the line
Feel the walls if you dare
Of your big ole box

Nod your head
Mumble a prayer
Never cast your eyes
Further then your reach
From your knees
Live a life/lie
Amen

Pretend
Pretend
Pretend
Freedom/Truth

* this is a rewrite from a poem I posted about a year ago*

Yoin

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Bill Charles
Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
1 posted 2009-07-08 10:49 PM


Yoinn - glad you reposted it, I enjoyed reading this writing...

BC

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