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Yoinn
Senior Member

since 2007-08-16

Posts 649
Michigan

0 posted 2009-07-08 08:48 PM

a rose

we had a secret
where there could be none
we grew a rose
where there was no sun
we had such passion
where none was allowed
we shared a love
but never out loud

Yoin

brneyedgrly
Senior Member

since 2009-06-08

Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere

1 posted 2009-07-08 09:01 PM

~yo, yo....

sometimes those secret loves are the richest...

i'm glad you got to experience one

love,

berney

Yoinn
Senior Member

since 2007-08-16

Posts 649
Michigan

2 posted 2009-07-08 09:17 PM

thank you berney.

rich yes.

often costly tho

yoin

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2009-07-08 10:50 PM

Yoinn - liked your thoughts in this writing, well done...

BC

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2009-07-09 04:42 AM

A very fine romance, thanks for the poem.

yann

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2009-07-09 09:26 AM

Very nicely "confessed", dear Tim!

Secret love has its charms no doubt.

Love,
Margherita

Yoinn
Senior Member

since 2007-08-16

Posts 649
Michigan

6 posted 2009-07-12 12:45 PM

Thank you Bill, Glad you liked it.

Yoin

Yoinn
Senior Member

since 2007-08-16

Posts 649
Michigan

7 posted 2009-07-12 12:45 PM

Thanks for reading Yann

Yoin

Yoinn
Senior Member

since 2007-08-16

Posts 649
Michigan

8 posted 2009-07-12 12:46 PM

lol I must be slipping I confessed to somthing.

Thanks for the reply Margherita.

Yoin

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

9 posted 2009-07-12 11:46 PM

This is beautiful.

Alison

OldPoet
Member

since 2009-06-30

Posts 112
The Left Coast

10 posted 2009-07-13 12:02 PM

Right on, Alison! Not only beautiful but its brevity enhances its impact. Well done!

"And every time I've held a rose
It seems I only felt the thorns,
And so it goes" - Billy Joel

Yoinn
Senior Member

since 2007-08-16

Posts 649
Michigan

11 posted 2009-07-13 06:24 PM

Thank you Alison and O.P.

Yep like the old saying. you never see it coming but you watch it leave forever.

Yoin

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