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Dark Star
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since 2008-02-20
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Lost in your eyes

0 posted 2009-07-08 07:07 PM





Stained

Stolen, are my words,
for your touch has taken
away my last breath.

Bright, are my eyes,
for your words
always light me up.

Stained, are my lips.
For your kiss
is so intoxicating.

Lana

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Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2009-07-08 07:44 PM


Very lovely, dear Lana!

Margherita

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
2 posted 2009-07-09 05:48 AM


Well done.
  Ida

Johan
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since 2009-05-13
Posts 88
Lincolnshire, England U.K.
3 posted 2009-07-09 06:31 AM


Great job, would make a fantastic Valantine card.

Johan

Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
4 posted 2009-07-09 12:08 PM


LOVELY!!! I really liked the photo with it too


ARCTIC WIND

Dark Star
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Lost in your eyes
5 posted 2009-07-09 12:14 PM


Margherita, thnx


Lana

Dark Star
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Lost in your eyes
6 posted 2009-07-09 12:15 PM


march, thnx sweetie
Dark Star
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Lost in your eyes
7 posted 2009-07-09 12:15 PM


johan, really.. thanks, that made my day


Lana

Dark Star
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Lost in your eyes
8 posted 2009-07-09 12:15 PM


artic, thnx


Lana

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
9 posted 2009-07-09 12:18 PM


His "touch", his "words", and his "kiss" sound as intoxicating as your precious poem!


EA

Dark Star
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Lost in your eyes
10 posted 2009-07-09 12:20 PM


thanks ea,


Lana

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