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kudanesh
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since 2007-12-01
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Peterborough,England

0 posted 2009-07-08 05:52 PM



The news reported again today
More civilians were killed
Hospitals tried to save them
But death had them out skilled

Another racial terrorist group
Has hit the innocent again
They clam to be for peace and freedom
But they are all the bloody same

Its not just one religion
They all think their the one
They kill in the name of something
That might have been made up for fun

And it is not just the recent Muslims
It’s the Christians as well
The Jews and Catholics are just as bad
Yet its peace and love they sell

This might offend some people
But there offending me
By always trying to tell me
What I can and can’t believe

So to hell with all these people
That force there belief and will
When what they are a part of
Is getting people killed

© Copyright 2009 Andrew Hull - All Rights Reserved
Clang
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since 2005-12-15
Posts 222

1 posted 2009-07-08 05:57 PM


Your poem is a powerful write.  It reminds that  ethnocentrism to any extreme can be lethal.  Hopefully the world will learn that we are all one, that we are bound by economies, a universal planet and by a species.  Well done!
kudanesh
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since 2007-12-01
Posts 135
Peterborough,England
2 posted 2009-07-08 06:03 PM


thank you I was hoping people would see this the right way. and you hit it on the head
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
3 posted 2009-07-08 06:59 PM


All the wars along the centuries have not yet opened the eyes to humanity ... that the secret is just in becoming aware of being all brothers and sisters, children of the same Creator.

Thank you, dear Kudanesh, for expressing your opinion so effectfully.

Nice to see you back!

Love,
Margherita

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