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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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0 posted 2009-07-08 08:57 AM



I do not think you see
What it is I do
I do not think you feel
I am important to you
But if I were to leave
If I were to go away
I would want you to know
Only good thoughts are left for you
And if by chance you miss me
Then all is well
No need to follow thru
For I will know
And this will bring a smile

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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1 posted 2009-07-08 09:25 AM


seems they never realize, until we do leave...

enjoyed this

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2 posted 2009-07-08 09:38 AM


'Tis a sad state of affairs, but we often don't fully appreciate something ~ or someone, untily they are gone.

May you always have a reason for smiling from the inside out. You are a very special human being, Roneice.

Love, a big hug, and a warm smile,

Linda

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3 posted 2009-07-08 09:58 AM


I am missing you, RDB.  This is sweetly sad.

xoxoxo
Ali-girl

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4 posted 2009-07-08 10:34 AM


nice of you to be so nice,,he must have been nice

Chalmette Guy
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5 posted 2009-07-08 10:43 AM


And the knowing is half the battle. And fun. lol

I understand this completely.

MinSW
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6 posted 2009-07-08 11:15 AM


so so so beautiful..and i can't say i haven't said this in my mind a thousand times... :-)

loved it!

love,
Min

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7 posted 2009-07-08 12:03 PM


How tenderly generous you are, dear Roniece, but this is the result of emotional growth and wisdom.

Beautiful in its melancholy!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

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8 posted 2009-07-08 12:10 PM


a beautifully tragic & triumphant write...very nicely done
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9 posted 2009-07-08 12:20 PM


Yo dear RDB,

This poem rather begs the question, how will you know?

Love Bobby

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10 posted 2009-07-08 01:07 PM


So touching, this is real love, thank you Roniece for a moment of happiness.

yann

Rick
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11 posted 2009-07-08 02:19 PM


Dear Roniece, when things are going well, people accept the God sent of the good days and so often forget who or what people made the day/days flow so well. The heart is a very sensitive part of us all, the simple word thankyou would suffice or a smile of gratitude; nothing brings the needing to be recognised and appreciated. I am so sure you are loved and appreciated by so many Roniece, life sometimes sucks but then we find a gift so sweet and again everything is ok.
I enjoy the fact that you are writing again my friend, thanks for sharing.

Rick

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12 posted 2009-07-08 05:44 PM


Roniece - such graceful words to someone left behind. Amazing write...

BC

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13 posted 2009-07-08 06:39 PM


A feeling some are plagued with ~ But this thought leaves a bitter taste with a sweet end. I really enjoyed reading your poem RDB! I always love to read your pennings...

I am hoping everything is well!


ARCTIC WIND

kudanesh
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14 posted 2009-07-08 06:41 PM


Brilliant I really enjoyed this

Thank you

Kudanesh

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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15 posted 2009-07-09 06:30 AM


you bless me all with your generous and loving comments.. thank you.. RDB x

Ali-girl, I miss you too x

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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