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OldPoet
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0 posted 2009-07-08 01:36 AM




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1 posted 2009-07-08 01:43 AM


I am a real believer of consensual sax - and I am a real believer in your poetry.  This is sultry and smooth.

A

OldPoet
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2 posted 2009-07-08 01:47 AM


Well, my dear, I am a real believer in believers like you. How could I not?

"And every time I've held a rose
It seems I only felt the thorns,
And so it goes" - Billy Joel

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Yay!
Let's be friends.

Consensual friends,
of course.

A

OldPoet
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4 posted 2009-07-08 02:03 AM


Of course.

"And every time I've held a rose
It seems I only felt the thorns,
And so it goes" - Billy Joel

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5 posted 2009-07-08 07:30 AM


I think there is nothing more sensual than the sounds of a saxaphone. It's a gutteral sound that  evokes our basic desires and brings them out....you express it very well.
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6 posted 2009-07-08 07:55 AM


Yes!  a smooth fitting of sax and sweltering romance.  Cute title, as well.
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7 posted 2009-07-08 12:04 PM


the last 3 lines of this are stunningly ambiguous -- clever write...soft and  mellow
jbstillwater
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8 posted 2009-07-08 02:56 PM


Ha!   What a treat!  You have posted one of my very favorite poems!  I did not know what I would find, but then here it is!

Huggs
Jan

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9 posted 2009-07-08 03:41 PM


Nice, smoothe, and Saxxy.

Well done, (Just the way I like em)
Tracey

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10 posted 2009-07-08 05:38 PM


OldPoet - now just add one consensual guitar with that sax, and amazing things can happen...

BC

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11 posted 2009-07-08 06:01 PM


You already had me with the title but the write is totally cool!
Nothing better than good sax, especially consensual sax.

OldPoet
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12 posted 2009-07-08 06:19 PM


Guitar? Ok Bill, you got it.

"And every time I've held a rose
It seems I only felt the thorns,
And so it goes" - Billy Joel

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13 posted 2009-07-08 06:48 PM


Enjoyed this very much so....


ARCTIC WIND

brneyedgrly
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14 posted 2009-07-08 08:06 PM



~poet...

love, love your title  

very clever...beautiful images here!

~s


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15 posted 2009-07-08 10:56 PM


The thought of consensual sax is very alluring. Just like this piece.

Arana Darkwolf

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