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brneyedgrly
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since 2009-06-08
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nowhere and everywhere

0 posted 2009-07-08 12:13 PM




riding people currents
wading through crowds,
tangible opportunities
that could occupy me

yet, no one’s eyes
match your oceans
rippled sun~kissed
waves painted here

and, no one’s words
drench like all your
whispered waterfalls
time standing still

too, no one’s attention
or pure water hands
could drown the want
raindrops mingling

i will force you to do
this thing called feel
pooling lovely head
with lonely heart

and sharing your sad
like endless rain,
sprinkling your temples
with soft dew kisses

come on inside, baby…
out of the downpour
be sweetly cleansed
by soulful showers
.



© Copyright 2009 shellie - All Rights Reserved
Heart2Heart
Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738
Scotland/Norway
1 posted 2009-07-08 12:23 PM


So fresh and enchanting, your writes are a pure joy to read.
Heart2Heart

OldPoet
Member
since 2009-06-30
Posts 112
The Left Coast
2 posted 2009-07-08 12:49 PM


So sensuously moist, so poignantly damp is this fine, fine write. Kudos!

"Im learning to fly but I aint got wings
Comin down is the hardest thing." - Tom Petty

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
3 posted 2009-07-08 07:58 AM


ms browneyes, the wet whet of this is a pleasure to sip from...enjoyed your woman here
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
4 posted 2009-07-08 08:05 AM


Another "hit", dear Shellie. You are on a roll. There will be no need to "force" anyone ... you have the subtle power of charm that will do it.

Wonderfully intimate and passionate.

Love,
Margherita

MinSW
Member
since 2009-06-14
Posts 53
Sri Lanka
5 posted 2009-07-08 11:12 AM


a new style shellie..nice..
brneyedgrly
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nowhere and everywhere
6 posted 2009-07-08 08:44 PM



~thank you, sweet heart lady



shellie


brneyedgrly
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7 posted 2009-07-08 08:45 PM



~poet...

thanks, so much for those kudos!




brneyedgrly
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8 posted 2009-07-08 08:46 PM



~thanks dark...




brneyedgrly
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since 2009-06-08
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9 posted 2009-07-08 08:48 PM



~thanks, dearest 'rita...

for seeing my intimate and passionate



love,
shellie


brneyedgrly
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since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125
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10 posted 2009-07-08 08:58 PM



~thanks, minoli!

love you,  
shellie


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