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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"speladish que moby attnoibm, resourceless fifteen, se lecherous gigiluell perobee sherumba narusta contin ahroble, ahroble harash koenish spadeedah salash parsinta, senta partin" he spoke in words surreal as if to offer incantations in broken-thought quotations of ideas of non-reveal in words spoken softly without meaning of dreams aplenty awash with feeling |
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OldPoet Member
since 2009-06-30
Posts 112The Left Coast |
Hmmm.... There is something that appeals to me in this but I can't quite get my analytic arms aroung it. If I stay to read a poem more than once rather than hitting the "get me outta here" button then it, in my humble opinion, must have enough merit to earn a comment. So I apologize to the author and other readers for failing to zero in on what I like about this, but I do like it. "Im learning to fly but I aint got wings |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
praying in tongues or "echolalia" is often helpful |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
OldPoet, thanks, I think...no,I am sure...I think...not about knowing...just being thankful martiniat8, sorry but never intended it to be a spiritual moment , just taking a dust mop to my mind...just watching an inane tv show...tuning into dialogue drivel...writing...thinking that it resembled some old dream...lodged in the crevasses of my memories...thanks for the kind comments |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Sounds fitting for so many politicians!! But the dream interpretation is adequate too. Enjoyed this much. Love, Margherita  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Doh laya mona selenmity, Selandoha ko serrah. Dom la moirra montania, So linguanna verrah.  |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Margherita, politicians? ...so funny -- thanks for your clever comments Linda, How cool is that? You had to have seen the same movie! (my only question--can you use that one word in a public forum?) |
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