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Open Poetry #45

Sangria

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2009-07-07 10:38 PM

A light breeze with sangria,
With her hair neighboring
The oceans wind,

The brim of her lips
Sat across from me,
With the candle wax
Dripping slowly.

The waiter walked gracefully
Through the crowds, through the
Eyes of night
That paled against the white sheet
Nestled underneath our plates.

I rested my eyes upon hers.
I could picture us diving
Into the abyss,
With no gear,
Just surviving on each otherÕs lips.

Careening off the waves,
Watching the sand bestow upon us as we lay.

We could sit in silence,
To the conversation between our eyes,
As our hands collided
Underneath the peopleÕs voices,
With a glass of sangria beside us.

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2009-08-03 08:18 PM

"I could picture us diving
Into the abyss,
With no gear,
Just surviving on each other's lips."

I could just see two people breathing each other for hours under water,
very cool. At least
that's what I wanted to see, I hope that was the result you were hoping to yield.

Enjoyed.

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