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Spiros Zafiris
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0 posted 2009-07-07 04:31 PM


the confluence of
will and might neath the pillow,
in his viens, shimmers
as a new dream enters, to
enliven his weary heart
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..circa 2009..Copyright 2009 Spiros Zafiris
..channeled; spirit Ram; reaching into my heart
..poem first appeared in Modern English Tanka, Spring Edition 2009

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1 posted 2009-07-07 10:47 PM


Interesting.  I like it.

A

Margherita
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Eternity
2 posted 2009-07-08 08:00 AM


This holds a beautiful message, dear Spiros.

Thank you for sharing!

Love,
Margherita

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3 posted 2009-07-08 11:52 AM


so much to draw from in so few words...still pondering...exceptional write
Spiros Zafiris
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4 posted 2009-07-08 09:48 PM


..hi Alison, Margharita, and steavenr..

..thank you for reading and commenting..I
appreciate the kind words..

spiros

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