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Open Poetry #45

A White Rose

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

0 posted 2009-07-07 11:02 AM

I’m dreaming of a white rose offered to me
I take her in cradling hands,
A gift that is given ever so freely
Her petals soft as the finest sand

Fair white rose, fairest of all
Plucked from the thorny bush
Oh how I can hear her lilting call
From all other roses I forsook

Holding close to breathe her in
A kiss now, mentioned not by name
Through lips red and moistened
Let the moment do all the proclaim

I suspend this breath inhaled
To cheat this dream beyond the pale

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2009-07-07 11:13 AM

~sigh~
I'm keeping this one.
Stunningly beautiful doesn't do it justice.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2009-07-07 11:36 AM

White roses are fascinating in their purity and how you describe your chosen one is truly enchanting.

You are beautifully inspired.

Love,
Margherita

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2009-07-07 11:43 AM

The white rose wouldst most assuredly feel safe, secure and adored in thy tender, loving hands.

Thy words be as soft and as pure as the petals of the sweetest rose, Sir Poet Knight.

~ A sighing maiden

unboundpoetess
Member

since 2008-05-24

Posts 477

4 posted 2009-07-07 12:42 PM

I suspend this breath inhaled
To cheat this dream beyond the pale

My personal fave *G*

Good stuff friend.
H

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