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Chalmette Guy
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since 2009-03-11
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Louisiana

0 posted 2009-07-06 04:40 PM


The clap and peal of lightning
Thundering boom through the fitful night
The electric fire striking all over,
This is what you are

The sky opening to clearest blue
After stormy, cloudy grey
The calm skies coming through,
This is what you are

The cool wind blowing fresh upon face
Invigorating every nerve alive
The movement through time and space,
This is what you are

The refreshing memory of what used to be
Somehow forgotten, lost long ago
The missing piece of the puzzle inside of me,
This is what you are

The food and drink of which I subsist
All there is and ever been,
The spirit that helps me exist,
This is what you are


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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2009-07-06 05:44 PM


Your poems are very passionate as of late~

WOW! enjoying them~

~ARH

Tara Simms Hall
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since 2001-11-07
Posts 87
South Carolina
2 posted 2009-07-06 10:57 PM


Whoever she is, she's great for your soul.

Tara

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Member Rara Avis
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In Your Poetic Mind
3 posted 2009-07-07 11:58 AM


lovely images....

~~**~~
I never let one moment define me,
I define myself by all moments and how they teach and touch me......02  

Chalmette Guy
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since 2009-03-11
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Louisiana
4 posted 2009-07-07 12:00 PM


Lovely of you to say so Lauren. lol

Thank you all.

unboundpoetess
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since 2008-05-24
Posts 477

5 posted 2009-07-07 12:38 PM


Impassioned words, Jer.

Digging this out from somewhere good.

Smiles,
H

Chalmette Guy
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since 2009-03-11
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6 posted 2009-07-07 12:40 PM


Digging way deep Heather.
I am glad people like this one, I wasn't too happy with it.

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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West Coast
7 posted 2009-07-07 02:05 PM


kewl grooves CG, you will make her wig tight if you keep this up..
Chalmette Guy
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since 2009-03-11
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Louisiana
8 posted 2009-07-07 02:07 PM


Thanks Dark, I think I am the only one 'wigging' though.
Spiros Zafiris
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Canada
9 posted 2009-07-07 04:03 PM


..very calming..much enjoyed..


spiros

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