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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. This time Not if but when I’m unemployed Spices as well As potatoes When I go to the store And a jar of gravy To cover it all— Too few years To matter So what the Hell Oh God forgive This simple sinner . |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo John, I'm with you on this. Why not? Bobby |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
Simply you have put forward the ironies of life and living itself. clever talks delay friendship! |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Yo John, this is divine, a wonderful description and sad too. thanks for the great work. yann |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
why not celebrate with spices and gravy...why not? this is cool |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Huan Yi - your writings are so real when I read them... BC |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~huan... i agree...eat gravy : ) i love the simplicity of your words coupled with the gravity of their meaning... shellie |
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