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Ericc
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0 posted 2009-07-05 01:56 PM



Yes,
Your lips remember.
Now let your body
Follow -
Beneath these tender layers…our
Spirits long mingle.




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2islander2
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by the sea
1 posted 2009-07-05 02:48 PM


nice read. thanks for the poem.

yann

Honeybunch
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2 posted 2009-07-05 03:03 PM


Lovely, Eric!  The "spirits" might have a lot to answer for in the future.

Helen

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Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2009-07-05 03:33 PM


Oh my.....sizzle!

~ARH

Margherita
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Eternity
4 posted 2009-07-06 06:21 AM


If she listens deeply she might hear the tingling ... like wind chimes that bring back nostalgic feelings.

Beautiful!

Love,
Margherita

bel1e
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5 posted 2009-07-06 12:31 PM


niiice

     

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2009-07-06 06:31 PM


Nice...James
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7 posted 2009-07-06 09:09 PM


Beautiful.

It's always good
to see you back.

A

OwlSA
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8 posted 2009-07-07 01:34 PM


Beautiful!

Owl

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9 posted 2009-09-23 05:05 PM


Some things are unforgettable. *S*

Beautiful, beautiful! *S*

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