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Ericc
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0 posted 2009-07-05 01:55 PM


Now,
Even though we’re unfamiliar…I wonder if
Your lips remember mine?
Once we met across the threshold of
The flesh - a world we only
Bordered for moment
Held together.
What part of you remembers?
And have my fingers lost the trace that
Curved against them in a smooth
Ride of holy pleasure?
I don’t know.
But I wonder….and I find myself lost in
Places once familiar.
Wishing you would find me.



© Copyright 2009 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
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South Africa
1 posted 2009-07-05 03:06 PM


Wish I had read this one first.  You will be found but then again perhaps being lost is just a perception based on an illusion.  That aside, a pleasure to read.

Helen

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2009-07-05 03:35 PM


and found....

~ARH

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2009-07-06 06:15 AM


Your longing of what once was is so deeply felt, dear Eric, in this beautiful intense write.

May things evolve for your highest good, and hers too ...

All my love,
Margherita

bel1e
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since 2006-07-24
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4 posted 2009-07-06 12:32 PM


lovely~

     

OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
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Durban, South Africa
5 posted 2009-07-07 01:28 PM


Ericc, I think you should give this to her.  I can't believe that any woman could possibly resist such a beautiful poem and such homage and respect given in such exquisite humility and honesty.  It would certainly have ME weak at the knees.

Owl

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