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poddarku
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since 2008-01-15
Posts 589
india

0 posted 2009-07-05 07:10 AM



DNA
(After I heard of her)
........................an
                                                          ................evolved
                                                  ................................cell
                                                             ........................................is
.......................breaking
                  the.................
                          chain..........
     ........being
                                                         .......................hidden
                                         .............................somewhere..........
                                                                  ................inside
                                                                          ...............................my
                                                                               ...............soul,
                                                               .....................self
                                                       ...............................and
                                         ....................vacant.........
                                                       .................................thoughts.
                                                                        .................Am
                                                                                  .......................I
                                                                    ............................Even
                                                      .................Myself
                                           .....................these.....
                                                                                 ..............days
........................?
=© 2009 - All Rights Reserved Kushal Poddar

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© Copyright 2009 poddar kushal - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2009-07-05 07:30 AM


I am blown away by this, dear Kushal!
You have experienced a wonderful moment of oneness. What are we, if not fragments of a Whole, what are we, if not sparks of one divine Source?
You are indeed larger than how you can perceive yourself usually, not just the limited self, your are a divine multiplicity.
I will want to come back to this often, to enjoy the feeling of your deep and beautiful perception.
Love and hugs.
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
2 posted 2009-07-05 08:00 AM


Ku..can I offer you a hug? I would love to give you a hug.. this is truly beautiful!

xx RDB xx

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
3 posted 2009-07-05 09:28 AM


This is very deep and very beautiful, Kushal.  We are all one and each one of us, is all of us.  It can be read on so many levels, but I think the most important unit in life, is family.  If the world could only understand that, and embrace it, and expand it slowly, world peace would be so much closer.  

Owl

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
4 posted 2009-07-05 11:16 AM


Ku, you are a far more sophisticated writer than I am thinker. I do not think I can fully grasp where this one is coming from, but I will tell you this, you certainly are conveying anguish and for that, I am wrapping my arms around you and sending you LOTS of love.

Linda

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