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Inspired-8 Member
since 2008-04-14
Posts 311Pluto 
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What becomes Of dreams undone Whom do hear The whispered tears Where to follow If to hide Heavy sorrow Seeps inside Saddened moments Constant torment Recalling days When dreaming made Lost forever Alone to cry Dreams of never All to die... Inspired-8 |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Vic, such deep melancholy expands on the page here, but you wrote this so beautifully, I want to reach out with a big hug to comfort you. Love, Margherita  |
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MinSW Member
since 2009-06-14
Posts 53Sri Lanka |
Dear Vic, Really beautiful..and brilliant rhythm... love, Min |
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Tiffiena Junior Member
since 2009-07-03
Posts 19 |
I agree with both comments. It had a wonderful flow. =) |
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