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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. This cool night Is not to be missed Even the fireflies Normally prowling the air This time of year for love Are still With pleasure I feel the chill On bare legs and arms Mute in peace Under summer stars The sound of cars On the road below There’s nothing I want . |
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OldPoet Member
since 2009-06-30
Posts 112The Left Coast |
How seminally provocative this gem is. Read, see, and feel. As it should be. |
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Clang Member
since 2005-12-15
Posts 222 |
I especially like the last line. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
enlightning poetry, significant sensations, another very enjoyable read. yann |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You write mood poetry, and set the scene so well. Love the sound of this~ |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
A time to treasure, John. ida |
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