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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

0 posted 2009-07-04 12:16 PM

The ocean which illuminates itself
Whets our appetites,
Our oars like carved spoons
Dive in the gleam of sleepy fruits,
Like loving childly fingers
In the deep of blue sky jams .

Heart2Heart
Senior Member

since 2009-05-15

Posts 738
Scotland/Norway

1 posted 2009-07-04 02:16 PM

You have some heavenly descriptions there Yann, a poem right up my lane. Thank you for sharing.
Heart2Heart

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2009-07-04 04:23 PM

Dear Yann, this is amazing "stuff" you know! A keeper and one of your very best.
I looove it!

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

3 posted 2009-07-04 04:26 PM

yann

I really love this.

Alison

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

4 posted 2009-07-04 05:08 PM

very imaginitive..I liked it Yann...ooo---la---la....!

~ARH

I dream in fantasy, because reality is scary~Millette (ARH)

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

5 posted 2009-07-05 10:40 AM

Oh, I love this Yann.

Owl

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2009-07-05 10:59 AM

Yann, your imagination is a beautiful thing! ~ and you are blessed with the talent to express it so beautifully through your wonderful poetry!

Love 'n smiles,
Linda

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

7 posted 2009-07-06 02:34 PM

thank you all my friends poets for your warm and lovely comments.

yann

Billie Cullimore
Member

since 2009-03-27

Posts 315

8 posted 2009-07-07 03:01 AM

What a delectable dish you have created for our plesure. Thank you.

Love 'un stuff

Billie C.

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

9 posted 2009-07-07 04:23 AM

thank you Billie the origine of the poem is a painting of sea by an american painter.
thanks for the kind comment.

yann

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

10 posted 2009-07-07 09:50 PM

I love the imagery...the title...the pop!...excellent...

unboundpoetess
Member

since 2008-05-24

Posts 477

11 posted 2009-07-07 11:47 PM

Love your language here.

Very nice.
H

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