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Suncleaver
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since 2009-01-18
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Stafford England

0 posted 2009-07-04 02:44 AM


I walk along the icy galleries of rain,
The waves that roll within my heart,
The soughing wind will seem to speak her lonesome pain,
And keep us ever far apart.

Another ocean's span, another heedless mile,
To pull the thread of entwined souls,
But I shall ever bear the kiss that grew my smile,
No embers die from lover's coals.


With love, to A Romantic Heart.

I've been away to Spain, and I've missed you all terribly. None more so than my lover, my beautiful and sensitive Millette.


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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2009-07-04 02:47 AM


I have missed you....you can even read about it, in my loneliness poem....

Come allow me to melt that ice....

Your love~
Millette

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2009-07-04 06:40 AM


Nice to see you back with such a lovely, romantic poem.

Blessings to both.

Love,
Margherita

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
3 posted 2009-07-04 11:14 AM


Hi, Luke! It is so good to see you posting again! I hope you enjoyed your time in Spain, ole!

"I walk along the icy galleries of rain,
The waves that roll within my heart,"

~ You certainly know how to convey your emotions in very creative ways! You truly are a fine writer!

Giving you a warm, welcome-back hug,

Linda

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