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DrK&7
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since 2009-07-01
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0 posted 2009-07-03 08:55 PM


Her hair is like a silver ribbon,
Her movement's smooth as air.
Her liveliness breathes with me,
And her love is tender and fair.

Her heart is always open,
With a sign hanging on it's door,
That if you love me truly,
"Each day I'll love you more."

Her eyes sparkle like a diamond raw,
And they show me the way.
Her fluttering eyelashes welcome me,
Into each, and glorious day.

But she is only a figment,
Of my wild imagination.
And the love I believe I know,
Is none but false sensation.

So I wish for her,
Her simple and timeless power.
But I know I cannot love her,
Because I am but a petal,on a dry and lifeless flower.

I dream of her, both day and night,
I feel like I have no sense,
How I would long to be part of,
The pure, The Lady's Essence.

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2009-07-03 09:50 PM


Keep dreaming, she just might show up some day. Enjoyed.
DrK&7
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2 posted 2009-07-03 09:54 PM


Thank you Midnitesun. I appreciate the reply very much.
BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
3 posted 2009-07-03 10:37 PM


Very pretty, love the wistful feel and the longing that lies within.

So nice~

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart
4 posted 2009-07-04 02:33 AM


I could slow dance to this one....To be called a lady is a compliment within itself!

beautiful words spoken...

~ARH


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