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sideways glances
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sideways glances |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere 
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your coastal eyes cast sideways glances my direction you painted panoramic pictures for my eyes only i imagined you juxtaposed between sand and sky i watched as you coat~checked dangerous at my door to tell me that you noticed something too girl in me and would i like a hand wearing my woman’s worth you seemed to enjoy it when i lost my lady~like and i dropped manners like busted pearls at your feet tripping us both into flesh~toned conversations your voyeur eyes watched then listened to my skin tingle when you asked all the questions you wanted to know and there was just enough kind in you to let you in it had something, everything to do with how i was asked |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
this is my favorite poem of yours, by miles. miles and miles. intelligent and artistic. P |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your phrasing and content make for a fabulous poem. Really nice, every single word of it! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Shellie, here the game is played beautifully and eloquently, I see. These glances bring smiles and abundance of inspiration. Intriguing and very well rendered "opening". Love and joy. Margherita  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"i imagined you juxtaposed between sand and sky" ~ You write some of the most unique and memorable lines!!! Love your poetry and the way you think and express yourself!   Linda |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~thanks, paul... for shooting me the 'i' word i've been having a blast experimenting with styles and subject~matter...and trying to discipline my free~verse spirit... ~s |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~thanks, blues... always nice when you stop in |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~thanks, dearest 'rita... for seeing 'beautiful', 'eloquent' and 'intrigue' in my poem... that means a lot  ~s |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~dearest ea linda... thank you...once in a while i capture something decent... i'm glad you enjoy my stuff as i do yours, sweet lady ~s (ss) |
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