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my veiled sisters |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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An invisible veil of fine lace covers her meditating face. Warm amber sun shines on an uplifted chin, though somber deepening shadows set the pace as another day of anticipation begins. The streets below may not yet be safe. She listens with rapt attention to boisterous birds vocalizing daybreak breakfast chants, ignoring silly human’s screeching rants about nothing...absolutely nothing at all that would impact the warp of time. Dark reflections of the heartache kind chill the moment, freeze the mind. She needs more time to plant seeds of change, nurture love and harmony. But her mind accepts darker shadows shall likely cover the land. Her prayer is that Gaia herself does not fall into total chaos, into some hole of eternal darkness because humans fail to learn the art of love as well as they learn the art of war. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
powerfully effective 'write'! I am especially fond of the ending: "Her prayer is that Gaia herself does not fall into total chaos, into some hole of eternal darkness because humans fail to learn the art of love as well as they learn the art of war." sustained applause for this timely 'penning'! ! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thanks, Bruce. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
powerful ending...very deeply thought-provoking...nice job...so very well done, but I must confess, you had me at the title... |
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Clang Member
since 2005-12-15
Posts 222 |
Beautifully done. I could picture her in my mind. |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
I just knew I shouldn't have logged in here this morning before going to work.... Now I'm going to be late, and it's because of you dear Midnitesun and my old friend Old Poet. This is just so moving and exquisitely expressed I have no words. And the last stanza has just done it for me. Dang, now I'll have to go and put my mascara on all over again:-) Katriona |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
words of generosity, and a powerful painting of thoughts...Words are graceful and efficient and for sure that is the purpose of poetry...Thanks midnitsun and thanks too for changing the print of letters (I was not comfortable with the ancient ones).. have anice day yann |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
From one old, tree hugging, California girl to another... I just love this. Ida |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A softly whispered thank you to each of you for reading and commenting. Katriona, sorry about the morning mascara run! |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Your paintings are as beautiful as your heart, Kacy. I am still seeing every brushstroke of this (Vincent, take lessons!) - it is like a French art movie, especially with the amber light. I am so proud and grateful to be your friend. Owl |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Di, you've made me blush with that reply. To be compared with Vincent in any way is an unbelievable honor. THANK YOU!  |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Wow I am at a loss for words for a piece that not only reflects an understanding of events but shows insight into the human mindset. You paint a universal setting onto an intimate canvas, and that's what touches us so deeply Liz |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
You have blown me away with this one. What a resounding statement for change spoken by a lovely poet. Alison |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Elizabeth, that reply...coming from one of Passions best, brought a tear of thanks. For me, the 'sisterhood' is worldwide, and their hearts beat loud and clear for global changes. Alison, my dear, you make me feel 'warm' just reading your replies. I am glad you read this particular write. Thanks, and hugs to you. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Kacy if I could think that you have outdone your self this one would be it. You have a heart and mind set to perfection when it comes to caring and love. Thank you. latearrival. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Jo, thank you for that kind comment. Sometimes these writes come to me at 5 AM, but don't hit the keyboard until after a cup of coffee. This one began with an early AM meditation just before the sun began to soften the dark shadows in the room. It was a 'me' oriented poem until it hit the keyboard, at which time I 'felt and saw' a 'sister spirit' across the seas in her morning meditation. To the universe, we are one and the same spirit, pleading the same cause...peace for humanity and Gaia, our mother Earth. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You always keep present the whole picture, while focussing on a significant detail. These are the words of an evolved mind, of an awakened spirit, of a brave and courageous woman. The colors of your soul blend beautifully with those of your veiled sister. Together you are planting those seeds of harmony. Excellent. Love, Margherita  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Margherita, that is one of the warmest kindest replies anyone can ever receive. Thank you, for reading my heartbeat, and for being the highly spiritual, evolved woman you are. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice  |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
My pleasure, Kacy - and everyone else's who reads the beauty you paint! Owl |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
"Dark reflections of the heartache kind chill the moment, freeze the mind. She needs more time to plant seeds of change, nurture love and harmony. But her mind accepts darker shadows shall likely cover the land." indeed! |
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