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pen&paper
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since 2006-06-06
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0 posted 2009-07-01 07:09 PM





You know...I cry sometimes.
I think about how you used me
Broke my heart
Fell in "love" with me
Broke my heart
"Redisovered your issues"
Broke my heart

Damn, boy.
Calm down.
You say I'm a rollercoaster?
Look in the mirror.
You're the one who

Used me
Broke my heart
Fell in love with me
Broke my heart
"Rediscovered your issues"
Broke my heart

What gets me is that
You loved HER the entire time
Your "issues" weren't a 'what'
They were a 'who'
It leaves me wondering


HOW COULD YOU DO THAT TO ME?
i love you, a_~hole.
HOW COULD YOU DO THAT TO ANYONE?
is nothing good enough?

Are you content being constantly unhappy?
I mean, really.
I was a distraction.
That's it.
Now I think what you want
Is a distraction
From all the sh*t you put me through.

It doesnt work that way, sweetheart.
Girls are not distractions for you to toy with.
We feel. Violently.
Do you really want to deal
With that kind of negative voilence

Again?


© Copyright 2009 Cierra L. Robbeloth - All Rights Reserved
DrK&7
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since 2009-07-01
Posts 40

1 posted 2009-07-01 08:04 PM


I feel the emotion. Nice job expressing your feelings.
DrK&7
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since 2009-07-01
Posts 40

2 posted 2009-07-01 08:05 PM



A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2009-07-01 09:40 PM


POWERFUL~INTENSE!

Loved the emotion!

~ARH

kindredspirit
Member
since 2009-05-19
Posts 156

4 posted 2009-07-02 01:12 AM


Very passionate and heartfelt, your emotions came through loud and clear, and I identify.
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