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Chalmette Guy
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since 2009-03-11
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Louisiana

0 posted 2009-07-01 04:07 PM


I, having been guilty before
Of turning my back upon here and now
Casting a blind eye against
What a child once vowed
I will treasure time above all else
I will savor every feeling felt

Begged forgivenesses offered up
Small tokens this time too late
For time is not the friend I imagined
Nor is he willing to wait
Will not dwell on what the wise cannot see
I must contend with what is before me

Drowned under the weight of it all
Lord knows I have myself to blame
Going down into depths unexplored
Of moments unrestrained
I shall gather all of these tears
That fall with the swiftness of the years

For that is all that is promised
And only on that will I dwell
Being that you cannot return
And where you go, no one tells
Everything else lies under shroud
So I too, will live for right now


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Heart2Heart
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since 2009-05-15
Posts 738
Scotland/Norway
1 posted 2009-07-01 04:18 PM


You're writing my life story too this evening dear Chalmette.  I am quickly becoming a very great fan of your poesy !
Heart2Heart

Chalmette Guy
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since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257
Louisiana
2 posted 2009-07-01 04:20 PM


Thank you K...I wish I could tell you how much that means to me.
Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2009-07-03 10:00 PM


This one goes deep into the heart, where you play the strings so well, Jerry.
brneyedgrly
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since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere
4 posted 2009-07-04 11:56 AM



~jerry...

Begged forgivenesses offered up
Small tokens this time too late
For time is not the friend I imagined
Nor is he willing to wait
Will not dwell on what the wise cannot see
I must contend with what is before me

~very good stuff here!  

~s


Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
5 posted 2009-07-04 05:12 PM


quote:
Drowned under the weight of it all
Lord knows I have myself to blame
Going down into depths unexplored
Of moments unrestrained
I shall gather all of these tears
That fall with the swiftness of the years



This holds great depth, dear Poet.

Love,
Margherita

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
6 posted 2009-07-05 09:56 PM


You should publish all your poems in a book collection~
seriously!

I am still trying to find out who that mystery lady was in your poem...she is poetry....just read it again...

~ARH

Dreamer05
Junior Member
since 2009-06-23
Posts 30
Kansas
7 posted 2009-07-06 03:23 PM


Nicely done! The more I read of your work, the more I admire your skills. Your work is quickly starting to become a favorite of mine.


~Dreamer05~

Chalmette Guy
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since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257
Louisiana
8 posted 2009-07-06 03:27 PM


Wow...that is amazing Dreamer. I thank you.
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