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Unfortunate Souls |
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tatalinia Member
since 2005-12-17
Posts 137CA, US 
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Time explodes it erases our existence as if it was never there I wish I could stop it for a moment Breathe in the beauty of life Engage in detail of all the special moments I have missed Unfortunately none of us were granted this To record every beautiful thing life has to offer Instead we live each day in fear that it could be our last Our memories erased of the laughs and tears of many years Why not granted of these years? Why? From the birth given by our mother to the day we breathe our last breath Life would be so much more had fate not stepped in to tell us of our toll We were not given a role Just another hopeless soul stuck in existence we didn't ask for We hope for the best but even money can't buy us this (LIFE) I do not need shine or wealth, just a pen and some paper for my health |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
nice |
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Sonofgloin Junior Member
since 2009-06-09
Posts 48Australia |
Great read, you nailed the dilemma of time vs mortality....Paul |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You expressed very well the fear of living, the fear of missing our mission here. The soul, in my opinion, is not unfortunate, it maintains itself whole and sacred and beautiful, through all our struggles, nudging us gently to awaken to love, to become aware of our power to share love, to BE LOVE. Dear Althia, you have written a poem that serves as a reminder, thank you. Love, Margherita |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Tatalinia, Count your blessings Hon. What you're missing might not be all that great. Love Bobby |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Open, honest, heartfelt! a reminder, of our life, what our mission is while we are here, to find it, do it, and cherish time.... ~ARH  |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hello tatalinia, enjoyed your poem and its thoughts, in my own way i appreciate that money can't buy happiness, it would be so unfair...Thanks for the clever words... yann |
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