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2islander2
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by the sea

0 posted 2009-07-01 04:33 AM


Oh my friend remember,
when you walk in marshes,
you have to move forward
and cross the restricting
sadness and sickness,
cause my friend remember
there are lands outside
with trees and green valleys
which wait for you to talk
and share about what you like.
Oh my friend remember
when you walk in marshes,
there are verdant lands.

[This message has been edited by 2islander2 (07-01-2009 06:30 AM).]

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martiniat8
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1 posted 2009-07-01 05:09 AM


well said and oh so true
Margherita
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2 posted 2009-07-01 06:13 AM


Oh, mon ami Yann, c'est beau et ça donne du courage. Un message très important.

Yes, true and wise!

Love,
Margherita  

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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3 posted 2009-07-01 07:14 AM


Yann.. I love this wonderful gifting from you.. it has made me feel positive.... thank you for sharing.. RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

poddarku
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india
4 posted 2009-07-01 07:19 AM


Your simple words "cross the restricting
sadness and sickness," moves me in a deep sea of thoughts. So true you, my poet, are.

clever talks delay friendship!

2islander2
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5 posted 2009-07-01 10:49 AM


Thanks martiniat for the appreciating and appreciated comment.

have a nice day

yann

2islander2
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6 posted 2009-07-01 10:52 AM


dear margherita, thanks for the kind comment, sometimes we need to cheer up to keep on walking and cross rivers of  life...Your words were important  for me in your last poem...

regards

yann

2islander2
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7 posted 2009-07-01 10:53 AM


Thanks Roniece, good to read something about you, time go so fast...

have  a nice day in sydney.

yann

2islander2
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8 posted 2009-07-01 10:55 AM


Thanks poddarku, your appreciation is important and I confess your poems inspire me in a subtle way.

have  a nice day

yann

OwlSA
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9 posted 2009-07-01 12:32 PM


Yes, Yann, this is a very, very beautiful and special poem.  Besides saving it in my Yann folder, I am going to read it often, not only for its beauty, but for its truth.  With your permission, I will also send it to various friends (always with your name attached to it, of course) when they need it most.  May I?

Owl

Midnitesun
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10 posted 2009-07-01 12:41 PM


Thank you for sharing this lovely gentle reminder. It is very soothing.
Robert E. Jordan
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11 posted 2009-07-01 12:59 PM


Yo Yann,

This poem is well written.  I like it.

Bobby

Huan Yi
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12 posted 2009-07-01 01:05 PM


.

Good Yann

Something almost native chant about it.

John

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2islander2
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13 posted 2009-07-01 01:23 PM


dear Owl, it is so kind to comment the poem in your own special way...I am glad that you found it interesting and happy that you would share it with friends. Thank you very much.

yann

2islander2
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14 posted 2009-07-01 01:24 PM


thanks midnitsun for reading and commenting, your kind words warmed me.

yann

2islander2
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15 posted 2009-07-01 01:25 PM


thanks Bobby I appreciate you passed on the track of my poem.

regards

yann

2islander2
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16 posted 2009-07-01 01:27 PM


Thanks John, sometimes the most simple things are the most precious, I am honored by your appreciation, thanks for passing by.

yann

Heart2Heart
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17 posted 2009-07-01 02:50 PM


Oh yes so true, what a lovely nature poem, I did enjoy reading this.
Heart2Heart

JamesMichael
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18 posted 2009-07-01 06:25 PM


Very nice...James
2islander2
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19 posted 2009-07-02 04:44 AM


thanks heart2heart, i appreciate your words.

yann

2islander2
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20 posted 2009-07-02 04:45 AM


thank you for visiting and commenting James.

have  a nice day

yann

OwlSA
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21 posted 2009-07-03 01:26 PM


Thank you Yann, for your lovely reply to mine and for your permission to pass this on, and especially for being happy that I will.  

Owl

Earth Angel
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22 posted 2009-07-03 07:38 PM


Yann, your beautiful spirit is an inspiring one. This reads like a psalm.

This was very soothing. An exquisitic gift of reassurance.

So often we cannot see the forest for the trees...

Love and a warm hug,
Linda

miscellanea
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23 posted 2009-07-03 08:15 PM


a sweet reminder of optimism!  Very much enjoyed, islander!

miscellanea

2islander2
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24 posted 2009-07-04 12:33 PM


thank you Owl and Linda for the precious comments...Great to know you.

yann

2islander2
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25 posted 2009-07-04 12:34 PM


thanks miscellenea, I am glad you appreciated the poem and left a message...

have  a nice day

yann

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