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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Ah a cool Summer breeze No I’ve never been Very good . . . At being unhappy Left alone in a time Without company I have a tendency Contrary to despair It takes the presence Of someone else Bent from birth In discontent To make me See constantly The error of my ways Oh I admit my sin Mary Magdalene White clouds Over water Light through leaves On a single tree . |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
John, this really speaks to me. And since when being happy is a sin? You are a true gift to those you speak of. Very significant write. Enjoyed very much. Love, Margherita |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~huan... i really like your writing style...and how you work your words: It takes the presence Of someone else Bent from birth In discontent To make me See constantly The error of my ways ~fantastic! ~brneyedgrly |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I understand what you are saying here, John, and love they way you say it. Ida |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"I have a tendency Contrary to despair" ...love this...excellent write |
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