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brneyedgrly
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0 posted 2009-06-29 11:39 PM





overture…

come on in
welcome everyone
stay for the show
follow the fun

brown~eyed girl
opens act one
admission at the door
hear her heartsongs

kewl heart lady
watch her work
spotlight on her
she weaves her words

our girl’s got grit
unsinkable spirit
read it in her words
listen, hear it

watch real closely
pay attention now
big finale coming
kick the footlights out

written applause
standing ovation
she takes her bows
gathers bouquets

hopefully anticipating
tomorrow’s review
to immortalize her words
in pip culture blue

encore…
________________________

~this, too, was kind of inspired by margherita's comment with a line or two thrown in for ds...
it's just me havin' fun  



[This message has been edited by brneyedgrly (06-30-2009 12:51 AM).]

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Midnitesun
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1 posted 2009-06-30 06:51 AM


LOL, kick off the stilettos and have some kewl fun splashing your personal paints on this blank blue canvas.
Chalmette Guy
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2 posted 2009-06-30 08:30 AM


This was a fun one Shellie.
Full of whimsy that you seem to do so well.

Take a bow. So to speak.

Margherita
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3 posted 2009-06-30 08:45 AM


Dear Shellie, it is such a pleasure to count you among our members, I tell you!

Your talent, your effervescence, your humor, your loveliness, your sensuousness, your sensitivity, your openness add so much to the atmosphere of pip, that we can only say thank you so much for finding us. How did you find us btw?

This is another cute offering to enjoy. Dance on and enjoy it, while delighting us.

The inspiration is mutual, dear Shellie, always.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

WTBAKELAR
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4 posted 2009-06-30 09:24 AM


On witht the show, this is it.

Lite, fun, upbeat,

Well done,
Tracey.

Heart2Heart
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5 posted 2009-06-30 01:24 PM


Oh this is great, muchly enjoyed :-)  Like a breath of fresh air here today.
Heart2Heart

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2009-06-30 02:13 PM


ms brown eyes...enjoyed your little dance here..wicked smile
Bill Charles
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7 posted 2009-06-30 04:59 PM


brneyedgrly - always most enjoyable readings from you...

BC

brneyedgrly
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8 posted 2009-06-30 08:34 PM



~dear midnitesunshine...

girl...i leave the stilettos on when body painting...they leave interesting strokes on the canvas...lol

thanks  


brneyedgrly
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9 posted 2009-06-30 08:37 PM



~jerry...

thanks for seeing the whimsy in this...it was totally meant in that manner.

  thank you


brneyedgrly
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10 posted 2009-06-30 08:41 PM



~tracey...

i thought of that line too when i used the word 'overture'...lol

thanks  

brneyedgrly
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11 posted 2009-06-30 08:43 PM



~thanks, heart~lady  : )

i'm glad you liked my lil' poem    

brneyedgrly
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12 posted 2009-06-30 08:48 PM



~dark...

i told you not to take your eyes off me  

thanks for the lines...

~s


brneyedgrly
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13 posted 2009-06-30 08:50 PM



~thanks so much, dear bill...

love,  
s


brneyedgrly
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14 posted 2009-06-30 09:15 PM



~dearest 'rita...

can i just say that you make me feel so good about myself...thank you for seeing and appreciating all those things in me...i didn't realize anyone was paying attention.

i came to pip like we all did, i suppose...to be a writer...a need to share my poems with someone...to be understood.  i chose carefully; i didn't want to just put them out anywhere.  

what i wasn't prepared for were all of you wonderful people...i didn't realize how i would get to know you all 'from the inside out' (read that in one of serenity blaze's writings)...and that i would come to care so much for everybody...

and by far the best part has been reading everyone else's work...i am in awe at the talent in these blue pages and have never experienced so many kindred spirits in one place before

thank you from the bottom of my heart, 'rita...you are awesome!

  

~s

Earth Angel
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15 posted 2009-07-01 01:44 AM


Brown-eyed Beauty, you came on the pip stage like a blast of fresh spring air! Your poetry is delightful ~ and you are delightful!

"Pip culture" ~ Now that's kewl! Love it! ~ very clever! ~ and yes! We do seem to have our very own  culture! ~ a family of kindred spirits!


SS

Margherita
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16 posted 2009-07-01 06:46 AM


((((((Shellie))))) ... yes, like Angelo Terrestre EA says, you are a "like a blast of fresh spring air"!

Dance on!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

steavenr
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17 posted 2009-07-01 01:09 PM


...now this is a ticket well worth the price of admission...enjoyed the show...
Robert E. Jordan
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18 posted 2009-07-01 01:15 PM


Yo dear Shellie,

This is very nice, I like it loads.

Love Bobby

brneyedgrly
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19 posted 2009-07-01 10:08 PM



~beautiful ea...

i think you are just as delightful : )  

thank you, thank you for thinking of me as fresh spring air!  i'm glad you got my title and i am thrilled that you are one of my kindred spirits...

love ya  
ss


brneyedgrly
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20 posted 2009-07-01 10:14 PM



(((((margherita)))))

heck...i'll never pass up hugs from you!



love ya,
s


brneyedgrly
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21 posted 2009-07-01 10:16 PM



~hey, steave...

i am glad you liked the show...thanks for playing along


brneyedgrly
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22 posted 2009-07-01 10:20 PM



~yo, dear bobby...

glad you liked my humorous side...

love,  
shellie


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