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When She Is He
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When She Is He |
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rachaelfuchsberger
since 2007-02-21
Posts 609Las Vegas, NV |
She tells me That I am her life But when she is he Will I be his wife? She tells me That I am her heart But when she is he Will I have his heart? She tells me That I am her mate But when she is he Will I have to wait? She tells me That I am her soul But when she is he Will I be the half to make him whole? She tells me That I am her everything But when she is he Will I be... his anything? Arana Darkwolf |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Arana, This is a fine write. I'm sure everthing will turn out as it should. It always does. Love Bobby |
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rachaelfuchsberger
since 2007-02-21
Posts 609Las Vegas, NV |
Thank you, Bobby. That's really sweet of you. It's hard sometimes for me to be secure in my standing with my girlfriend who, in a few years will be my boyfriend (she's a T-G). I'm not worried about my standing now. I KNOW where I stand with her now...but what about when she is he? Arana Darkwolf |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Lets try that again. "I'm sure everthing will turn out as it should. It always does." Bobby |
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rachaelfuchsberger
since 2007-02-21
Posts 609Las Vegas, NV |
Lol...I'm sure it will. Thank you, Bobby. Arana Darkwolf |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Arana, I never give advice to anyone, not even my own children. Giving advice only causes trouble. Love Bobby |
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rachaelfuchsberger
since 2007-02-21
Posts 609Las Vegas, NV |
Agreed, Bobby. Arana Darkwolf |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
I hope everything goes well for you. |
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moonbeam
since 2005-12-24
Posts 2356 |
I think it's a sad day when any purely physical change can affect true love.  I s'pose the question really is: is it just a physical change? Tricky one. |
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rachaelfuchsberger
since 2007-02-21
Posts 609Las Vegas, NV |
Oklahoma Rose, thank you. moonbeam, I'm sure to find out in due time. But as Bobby said, it will all turn out for the best. It always does. Arana Darkwolf |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I think this is one of the best poems of yours I have read - if not the best. It has made me think a lot - and I'd comment more but I hate the comments like "all's well that end's well". They kind of squelch all the conversation in between, dont't they? Love you, Z |
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rachaelfuchsberger
since 2007-02-21
Posts 609Las Vegas, NV |
Thank you, Z. Love you, too. ~Arana |
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