Summer's Song (my first haiku)

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Open Poetry #45

rachaelfuchsberger

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since 2007-02-21

Posts 609
Las Vegas, NV

0 posted 2009-06-28 07:17 PM

Summer's song
Sings sweetly to me
Through green trees

Arana Darkwolf

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2009-06-28 07:33 PM

I'm partial to haiku's, and this is really nice.

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

2 posted 2009-06-28 07:35 PM

Yo dear Arana,

This is an interesting little poem.

Love Bobby

rachaelfuchsberger

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since 2007-02-21

Posts 609
Las Vegas, NV

3 posted 2009-06-28 07:53 PM

Thank you both. I like trying new things, and found a haiku to be a challenge for me. I'm quite proud of this little ditty.

Arana Darkwolf

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

4 posted 2009-06-29 01:03 AM

It's lovely. I love nature and poems about nature. You nailed this one, Rachael girly.

xoxoxo
Z

Oklahoma Rose
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since 2008-02-28

Posts 1586
Oklahoma USA

5 posted 2009-06-29 06:12 AM

You did very well with this haiku. I, too, love nature.

rachaelfuchsberger

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since 2007-02-21

Posts 609
Las Vegas, NV

6 posted 2009-06-29 01:25 PM

Z, I always love your comments/compliments. Love you, girly. xoxoxoxoxo

Oklahoma Rose, thank you very much for your kind words.

Arana Darkwolf

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