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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
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So. El Monte, California

0 posted 2009-06-28 06:25 PM


Whatever I thought of you
is neatly folded
and put away in a box
painted with a star map
of what was.
Don't bother to look for it,
it has no concrete properties
so it is immune to
invasion of privacy.
Now...
Don't you feel better?

              Ida Werrett

© Copyright 2009 Ida Werrett - All Rights Reserved
brneyedgrly
Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere
1 posted 2009-06-28 06:44 PM



~yes, miss march...

some things are better left echoing on heart~strings...

i really like this poem

: )

secondhanddreampoet
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2 posted 2009-06-28 07:00 PM


excellent !!

much (sustained) applause for this 'penning' !!

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
3 posted 2009-06-28 07:04 PM


Oh Yes!!!  

Love the way you tell it like it is.

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
4 posted 2009-06-28 07:32 PM


Yo dear Ida,

I always feel "better".  This is a cute statement.

Love Bobby

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
5 posted 2009-06-28 08:01 PM


Yes, excellent is right! I love your take on things such as these, dear Ida!

Love,
Margherita

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2009-06-28 08:10 PM


Whew! Much better! lol

Have I ever told you that you are adorable? ~ Of course I have! ~ but I am 'ditto-ing' myself here...ADORABLE  

Loveya
Linda

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria
7 posted 2009-06-28 10:46 PM



Yes most adorable dear Ida Love

Lindsay

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8 posted 2009-06-28 11:54 PM


I do feel better.  I have a box like that.  Some things are just good to tuck away.

Thank you, Ida.

Alison

Oklahoma Rose
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since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586
Oklahoma USA
9 posted 2009-06-29 06:47 AM


I, too, have a box like that, Ida.
Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
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South Africa
10 posted 2009-06-29 07:15 AM


Well said, dear Ida.  Invisible boxes do weigh a ton though.

Helen

Midnitesun
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Gaia
11 posted 2009-06-29 07:52 AM


It's so true, some things must stay safely tucked away in a locked mind-corner.
Enjoyed this very much, Ida.

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