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Windhover
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 179
UK

0 posted 2009-06-28 11:56 AM



One more for the Ladies...


    


Come, gentle me into the comfort of your dreamland, sweet and bright;
for I have all, but lost my path... beset by shadows in the night.
Shine your beacon through the darkness; guide my footsteps from all harm,
that I may find my way into your dreams to rest safe, in your arms.

Come, gentle me into your comforting embrace, so soft, and warm;
safe from the bitter, nebulous chill of dreaming lost, and so alone.
Whisper gentle words to me, and drive away the unknown fear;
wrap me in your tender thoughts to help the darkness disappear.

Come, gentle me into that magic labyrinth that is your mind;
guide me down your chosen pathway; show me what there, I may find,
with which, you can bewitch me and delight me, so that I am lost
forever,
helpless in your spell; I willingly will pay the cost.

Come, gentle me into the soft, and fragile secrets of your heart;
whisper words I thought that I could never hear, nor be a part
of
any more;
but now, my hopes may fly again...I pray t'is so;
Come, gentle me into your world...
but how?
No-one, but you, can know.

'Bye for now.

D.


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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
1 posted 2009-06-28 12:31 PM


Thy tender, and most sensitive quill, doth write words that truly touch the minds and hearts of women.


Linda

Tara Simms Hall
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since 2001-11-07
Posts 87
South Carolina
2 posted 2009-06-29 12:04 PM


This is so soft and tender.  I love your phrasing.

Tara

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since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723
Louisiana
3 posted 2009-09-21 11:55 AM


Come, gentle me into your comforting embrace, so soft, and warm;
safe from the bitter, nebulous chill of dreaming lost, and so alone.
Whisper gentle words to me, and drive away the unknown fear;
wrap me in your tender thoughts to help the darkness disappear.

Such a beautiful plea... this lady likes very much! *S*

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
4 posted 2009-09-21 12:36 PM


You have such a lovely and sensitive way of expressing your thoughts, Windover, Love this.
                               Ida

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