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To a brother at the battlefields..
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To a brother at the battlefields.. |
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MinSW Member
since 2009-06-14
Posts 53Sri Lanka |
Good luck, brother, may you succeed May happiness light your day; You go fight your foes in field I'll stay at home and pray. Your arms be firm to hold the gun Your heart be strong, may, But keep this girl a place in there Who'll stay at home at and pray. Fight for your country, it calls you, Fight for your loved, they say; You go help those in need of help, I'll stay at home and pray. May our family be together soon, May no harm come your way; May your strength never fail, I'll stay at home and pray. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very touching! And when we think that on both sides there are mothers, wives, sisters and lovers having the same thoughts, it's really just so sad to see how we don't evolve to a level where war isn't an option anymore. Joining in your prayer for the safety of your brother ... Love, Margherita |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~ dearest min... once again you have captured the sadness and heart~break of sending loved ones off to war...i love this gentle poem... you are always in my prayers, little one... : ) |
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MinSW Member
since 2009-06-14
Posts 53Sri Lanka |
Dear Margherita, i welcome your prayers with hearfelt gratitude, though my blood-brother is not at war..but, there are many brothers all over the country, who were fighting for us. i will join your prayer with mine for them. Dear S, thank you, as always... love, Min |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
A lovely touching poem my girl, written from the heart, well done. Love and best wishes. Lindsay |
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