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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2009-06-26 11:19 PM



Poetry in motion...
that's what I used to be
when doing morning yoga
or running sveltely by the sea.

But now my routine stretch
gets me twisted like some vetch,
looking more like fodder for a compost heap
than some fetching Goddess daughter.

I remember when the full lotus
was not so far from reach...
only a short sliding movement away.
It's barely part of my morning fantasy today.

Oh well, even once pristine ripples
become fouled downstream
when they puddle and dimple
into stagnant cesspool ponds.

Now stretch and breathe
one, two, three,
lift those arms, move those thighs,
point your toes straight to the skies!

Who am I kidding?
It’s just another day of recovery
from the Body ‘Un’-Electric’s
early morning Yoga Pretzel-cises.


© Copyright 2009 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2009-06-27 01:33 AM


lol!!  oh this is great! I can relate, I can relate!!  

wonderful writing here Kacy.. xx

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Oklahoma Rose
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2 posted 2009-06-27 06:06 AM


LOL! I can bearly move in the mornings. If I didn't have a bad leg, I would try this.
Heart2Heart
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3 posted 2009-06-27 11:20 AM


Great fun write this one Midnitesun, loved your "poetry in motion".
Heart2Heart

Bloodline
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4 posted 2009-06-27 11:37 AM


Very true to the time
of life I feel, but I 've
been thinking to try that
doorway chin-up, pull-up
bar thing, of course only
thinking about it while
sitting in this easy chair, ha!

Yoga, hummmm, you sit for that right?
enjoyed the smile Midnitesun,

Bloodline

Tara Simms Hall
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5 posted 2009-06-27 12:07 PM


Ah!  Those sweet days of old...when our body parts were firmer, stood higher, and were so much more limber and supple.  I tell my hubby he should've seen me when I was 18...I was a sight to behold!  (Of course, I keep him around because he says I still am).
OwlSA
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6 posted 2009-06-27 01:17 PM


I love this, Kacy, esPECially the last line!  Smiles.

However, NOTHING you write or do or say will stop me from seeing you as being a free spirit ballet dancer in a flowing 3/4 length dress (white or sunflower-yellow with splotches of orange) with a flared skirt, dancing free form ballet, barefoot in fields of flowers! Once there was such a dancer who performed (dreadful word for what she was doing, because it was so beautiful and seemed so natural) in our church (barefoot and in a white dress), and it seemed to me that she was a South African version of you.  

Owl

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7 posted 2009-06-27 01:20 PM


Oh, and by the way, do you know how delicious fodder for a compost heap appears to a compost heap!  Smiles.

Owl

nakdthoughts
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8 posted 2009-06-27 04:14 PM


You  gave me a smile this morning as I watched  a yoga  show this morning wondering why I can't bend my body to my mind's wishes anymore

M

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9 posted 2009-06-27 04:19 PM


smiling...

I wish I hadn't lost my way with the yoga thing...I was actually SERENE when I was into that.

And like you, I find it hard to believe that the same person who could put her ankles behind her head (interesting times, those...*wink*) and *ahem* but just yesterday I pulled a muscle just from POINTING.

Sheesh

And no you're not a Goddess daughter.

You are Gaia herself.

Robert E. Jordan
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10 posted 2009-06-27 04:20 PM


Yo dear Kacy,

This is a good poem about exercise.  My dog Hilda manages my exercise routine.  She walks me three times a day.

Love Bobby


Midnitesun
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11 posted 2009-06-27 04:42 PM


Maureen, huess time is taking its
but we must fight it!
K, LOL, we should really sit and try that 'feet-behind-the-heads thing' some day!
Bobby, dogs are great exercise companions!
My Jack Russell Terrorist (in Alaska) "Skippydog" ran me daily, even in sub zero temps!

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