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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2009-06-26 04:39 PM



Whisper my wildwood name,
across evening waters dark,
disturbed only by rippled
circles of glooping carp.

Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength,while loving someone deeply gives you courage. Lao Tzu 6th century BC.

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2009-06-26 05:01 PM


Goldenrose, I love a good nature whisper.
A Romantic Heart
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2 posted 2009-06-26 05:03 PM


~Very seductive

I am going camping and hiking in the wildwoods
tomorrow night...

~ARH


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Realms of Light
3 posted 2009-06-26 05:13 PM


"glooping"? ~ I don't know whether you made that word up or not ~ but it works for me! lol
I'll have to remember that!

Whispering your name across The Great Pond,

Linda

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4 posted 2009-06-26 06:55 PM


This started out to be, what I thought was going to be a short romantic poem,  Then I read the last sentence, and laughed my butt off.


Glooping carp???????
In my wildest dreams, I never imagined to read "Gloopiing Carp" in a Poem.

Funny,
Tracey

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