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Dreamer05
Junior Member
since 2009-06-23
Posts 30
Kansas

0 posted 2009-06-25 07:10 PM


Where to Go


I don't know who he is.
I don't know who I am.
Where am I going in life?
I don't know if I can,
continue on this path I'm on.
Where will it soon lead?
Someone direct me!
Tell me where to go. Please!
Lost in a world of confusion,
I'm dizzy and can go no further.
Won't someone tell me where to go?
Oh! This is such a bother!
Lord, direct me, tell me where to go.
What will please you and make me happy,
I honestly don't know.

~Dreamer05~
May 19th, 2009



© Copyright 2009 Christine - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2009-06-27 10:15 PM


Welcome Kristine.
Nice flow to your first post.  A timeless question... creative presentation; an ethereal feeling to the verse.


martiniat8
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since 2003-06-21
Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic
2 posted 2009-06-28 12:26 PM


amen to that, i too share your quandry
Sunshine
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3 posted 2009-07-15 02:56 PM


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Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
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4 posted 2009-07-15 05:17 PM


Welcome to Pip!

I think we are all on the same boat and can relate to your first entry, which is well done!

Love,
Margherita

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2009-07-15 06:27 PM


Enjoyed...James
Dreamer05
Junior Member
since 2009-06-23
Posts 30
Kansas
6 posted 2009-07-18 11:12 AM


Thanks everyone! I really appreciate the welcome and the feedback. I am looking forward to reading other members works and sharing my own. Take care all!

~Dreamer05~

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