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Chalmette Guy
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since 2009-03-11
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0 posted 2009-06-25 10:50 AM


Write me a poem
Make it speak just for me
Sprinkle hidden messages
That only I can see

Tell me the truth
Of how you feel when I’m near
Written whispered words of desire
For only me to hear

Send it quick now
So that it reaches in time
This one who needs those words
Like oxygen from your mind

Without a poem from you
Life has no height nor breadth
With no words from your thought,
I die my thousandth death


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1 posted 2009-06-25 10:52 AM


hey! there you are....

nice picture...

enjoyed the poem too

Yoinn
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2 posted 2009-06-25 11:00 AM


This one flows so well and with beautiful thoughts.

I enjoyed its reading

Yoin

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2009-06-25 11:25 AM


CG

I'm writing this little poem for you.
~ It be not as grand as those you do,
But trust that it be real and true
~ I admire your works on these pages blue.

EA


P.S. Aha! Now we can see the handsome
face behind the illustrious quill!


unboundpoetess
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4 posted 2009-06-25 11:40 AM


well hey there handsome!

Nice thought to pluck treasures hidden in verse.

Glides my girly strings,
H

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5 posted 2009-06-25 12:17 PM


Happy 500th post!! *S* And hiya, handsome! *G* It's great to see the face behind the talent that gives us such wonderful poems.

One of the great joys of reading poems is finding a line that fits the reader so perfectly it just HAS to be theirs... the joy is even greater when they know the writer and KNOW the gift was intentional. *S*

Excellent write... as always! *S*

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6 posted 2009-06-25 06:28 PM


Here you go handsome:

You are a poetic nightdream,
spilling sensual songs
serendipitously,
but I know they are
just for me. ( )

When I search the starry skies
for poetry's passionate eyes,
who should I see frolicking
'neath dancing moonbeams,
but thee!

And then the sweet whispers
begin to float on the wind,
cloud pillow talk.

SHHH!
Just for you, PK.

kindredspirit
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since 2009-05-19
Posts 156

7 posted 2009-06-25 06:59 PM


I'll write you a thunderstorm
Expressing admiration
Pen on ink as lightning strikes
Words inflict sensation.

Tara Simms Hall
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since 2001-11-07
Posts 87
South Carolina
8 posted 2009-06-27 12:30 PM


I remember feeling like this at times, too.
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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Sydney, Australia
9 posted 2009-06-27 01:31 AM


wonderful gifting! and a very handsome pic!

RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Laverne Pacquire
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since 2009-11-15
Posts 96

10 posted 2009-12-16 08:01 PM


hey...another winner poem
dear fellow.

I have a response for you its a poem called
"it's beautiful..."

again its on my blog...poetryandwatertogo.blogspot.com

have a goodnight dear fellow.

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