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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2009-06-25 10:22 AM


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Look how they glow
Despite the risk

Yearning for sex—
Like the rest of us

Summer fireflies


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Yoinn
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since 2007-08-16
Posts 649
Michigan
1 posted 2009-06-25 10:42 AM


Beautiful work

Yoin

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
2 posted 2009-06-25 10:49 AM


Yo John,

So that's what the firefly thing is all about.  It makes sense.

Bobby

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
3 posted 2009-06-25 01:48 PM


Hmmm! I'm reminded of the lyrics of a song ~ "Come on Baby, light my fire!"

Oh, how I love those little fireflies lighting up the night with love! lol


EA

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
4 posted 2009-06-28 07:57 PM


I was just toying with fireflies in a poem not yet penned.
Fascinating glimpse of human nature...I think I'll just bask in the glow you wrote.  

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