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alphapendragon
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since 2009-06-23
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NY, USA

0 posted 2009-06-23 10:39 PM



My September girl is a master of her own inner Sanctum.
Her beauty is paralyzing to onlookers, who never seen that side of her continent.

My September girl gave me all of her love, soul, body and attention.
She will always be a treasure in this man's heart.
Her beauty is art and when she would leave, he would ask where is thou art?

My September girl has an inner door, that can only be opened by a special key.
This key he did not obtain, for this chorus was, and is still in his mind, and brain
Never can be to intoxicated off of her love, for she is like wine, and spirits, that never left a hangover.

My September girl comes from March, which can be seen as Mar's, for her visage was alien to me. What can I see when I look in her soul?

My September girl is Godly and deep. When she was with me she was asleep.
Now that she awoke from that cloud of smoke,
she realized her uncanny potential, her uncanny soul, and spoke of a dream where she was sweet as September.

My September Girl

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Bill Charles
Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
1 posted 2009-06-23 10:42 PM


alphapendragon - your September girl seems like a real treasure. Nice write...

BC

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2009-06-23 10:48 PM


September is a fine month for love,
I like to be a four seasons kinda of girl,
Love for every season....12 months and more...

welcome to PIP!
shes lucky to have your fine words for her!

~ARH

Clang
Member
since 2005-12-15
Posts 222

3 posted 2009-06-24 04:31 AM


She is a lucky girl...

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