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brneyedgrly
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since 2009-06-08
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nowhere and everywhere

0 posted 2009-06-23 09:53 PM




you whisper
wanting, watching...

you nudge me,
i'm not laughing...

you shake me,
seek me, softly...

you confuse me,
i'm not going...

you break me,
buy me, cheaply...

you tease me,
tell me nothing...

you leave me,
less than lonely...

as you whisper
wicked wanting...


[This message has been edited by brneyedgrly (06-23-2009 11:39 PM).]

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Clang
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since 2005-12-15
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1 posted 2009-06-24 04:41 AM


Some people are just hell bent on playing with your head...they are just not worth your time.  Great write!
Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
2 posted 2009-06-24 07:38 AM


and then you are taken...? enjoyed it ms
Chalmette Guy
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since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257
Louisiana
3 posted 2009-06-24 08:25 AM


Again Shellie, another style that you make work so well. I envy your diverseness, even if I just made up that word.
Wondering if this is the continuation of that rough diamond one?

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
4 posted 2009-06-24 08:52 AM


Yo dear Brneyedgrly,

This is a good one.  I'm glad you're not laughing, it's alway works better to be serious.  This one is after my heart.

Love Bobby

Oklahoma Rose
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since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586
Oklahoma USA
5 posted 2009-06-24 01:29 PM


I like the way you wrote this. This is great.
brneyedgrly
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since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere
6 posted 2009-06-24 07:03 PM




~thanks, guys...


this one just 'traveled down my arm' as one of my fav poets, alice walker, would say...one take and there it was...


thank you for your comments and i usually deliver some sliver of back~story on my poems in my replies, but... i am leaving the interpretation of this piece up to the reader...


whatever you get out of it was how it was meant...


~love~

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria
7 posted 2009-06-24 09:57 PM



Dear Brneyedgrly, if I read it correctly it sounds like a lot of gentlemen that I know

of. Beware young lady. Love to you and take care.

Lindsay

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
8 posted 2009-06-24 10:01 PM


brneyedgrly -

Your as pretty as a kitten
to know you is to be smitten

a brneredgrly sweet as pie
writing poems to make one sigh...

Oh well, you do write them with heart...

BC

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
9 posted 2009-06-25 06:44 AM


It comes through loud and clear, dear Shellie. The bees have smelled nectar ...

Great rhythm in this one.

Love,
Margherita

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
10 posted 2009-06-25 10:47 AM


I am sure you may unwittingly be casting a few spells of ypur own, you beautiful, brown-eyed girly!


EA

MinSW
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since 2009-06-14
Posts 53
Sri Lanka
11 posted 2009-06-25 11:35 AM


dear,

nice write..and true for the day i think..beautiful..

love,
Min

brneyedgrly
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since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere
12 posted 2009-06-25 08:33 PM




~thanks all you guys...love to hear from each and everyone of you, always....



~dearest min!  where did you go?  please email me or something, my far away friend ~hugs~


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